Vampire school
NAME:Bella
NICKNAME(S): Bell
AGE:16
BIRTHDAY:Aug 25
HAIR:Brown
EYES:light red
STYLE:Dark
LIKES:Reading,Moths Crystals
DISLIKES:School
FEARS:Heights,Blood
HOBBIES:Dance,Piano,Violin
NOTES:Daughter of the principle
(what i am about to say next is NOT an attack on you. please do not be offended, this is constructive advice)
ngl your character seems like a stereotype
and also a little too perfect
i mean
rich and popular? come on, it automatically makes your character “the best”
maybe give her some serious flaws at least
if she’s rich, maybe she’s bad at managing money
popular? maybe she’s a bit controlling/obsessive about how things go in her life
etc etc
I agree its kind of a Mary Sue
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i mean
look at the roleplay guidelines topic please 
we have a whole character form in there
Name: Lillith
Age:15
likes:magic, birds, astrology and reading
Kind but quiet girl
Dislikes: loud noises
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I used the template now :)